Free at Last (written rap)

[Fia$co]

i love the flow in this

i try to write like im always at the height of my prime
i wana shine the limelight on the grime like its sublime
close your eyes as i recite the shit i find in my mind
this odyssey is probably way ahead of my time
i understand if you cant comprehend what i rhyme
im just a man with a plan motivated to shine
gettin money cuz im hungry invented his own grind
flow like showtime each time he hold mic
what you witness is the viciousness inside his own mind
you swear you hear the fears imprisoned in the dyin
or the tears of the victims inflicted within a crime
in every line
welcome to this magic carpet ride through their eyes
we will strive to understand and realize what its like
to kiss life goodbye in the pursuit of paradise
here he lies
in his metal casket, just meal for maggots
or he's in the sky makin niggas feel the magic
the bad shit is only there as long as you will have it
the feelins acrobatic so flip it like gymnastics
you get the message or you miss the lesson?
see its a blessin to die and beat the test
up in heaven with dimes and free of stress
no more questionin life you reached the best
so sit back and relax and kick raps
with the Gs that passed
spread your wings and laugh
man you free at last

[Two-9-Five]

good shit my dude, i couldnt help but read it like Nas was spitting it

[msclark]

Originally Posted by Two-9-Five good shit my dude, i couldnt help but read it like Nas was spitting it

thats the kind of person i pictured 2. that is sumthin he wuld say.

good shit skeet