From the Heart
two verses. the flow changes in parts of it so i dont expect anyone to catch it. more interested in the critique of the lyrics. show some love.
[center:3deoaz15]From the Heart
I feel like my enemies wana get me by any means,
So I don’t get any sleep, it’s constantly hauntin me,
They probably watchin me like I’m a type of celebrity
In the shadows where devils creep and the darkness is heavenly,
They ain’t strapped? Well they better be cuz I’m fortified heavily,
Bring your soul and I’ll set it free if you plannin on stoppin me,
Smokin weed when it’s rainin and contemplatin philosophies,
Thought I had friends to count on but they ain’t there when I’d thought they be,
So I’m rollin alone in the cold, mind in the zone,
Apathetic to pathetic n!ggas on the wrong road,
Learn my lessons then forget em cuz I blow too much dro,
So I make the same mistakes and got a long way to go,
I’m tryna bake my cake and clear the plate before it gets cold,
The pain is prevalent even the heavens cry sometimes,
Like tonight as I sit here in the dark and write this rhyme,
The pen sparks and ignites the rhymes the lines collide
Inside my mind until i bring em to the light for your insight,
It’s poison food for thought and there's no antidote,
I figure once I get my life fixed then I can’t be broke,
I just came home from my bestfriend’s funeral,
It was hard but only half bad as the viewin though,
With no options I’m feelin boxed in like a cubicle,
Clawin at the escape ripped off my cuticles,
Livin in the fast lane cuz they get you when you movin slow
and when i fly by they wide-eyed like a two year old.
Got this chick,
Fuck the bitch and the shit that she puts me through daily,
It’s crazy that I even call this woman my lady,
It’s shady, she acts like she hates me,
The fact is she craves me
And everything that is exactly what makes me,
It makes me get angry and makes me just think
That it ain’t even worth all the work I put in,
We should bring it to an end
But we won’t cuz we know we supposed to be mo’ than friends,
I admit that I’m a dick, a downright prick,
And I know it hurts baby but you’re a straight up bitch,
So it makes sense that we would fit together like two Lego pieces,
It don’t take a genius, can’t you see that we were meant to be?
Or maybe it’s just me, possibly I’m hypnotized by that ass,
Maybe that’s why I put up with this crap,
I don’t know, fuck it though, all I know
Is I don’t wana take this road anymore,
You’re beautiful and it would be a shame to waste
A face so incredible with qualities of a criminal,
You’re always bein subliminal with that shit only women know,
Like you expect me to dissect a message of text when it just says “Oh”,
Or if you stress me to test me just to see how far it’ll go,
Then look surprised in the eyes when you got my hand on your throat,
But you was likin that in the sack just five hours ago,
It all comes back and you sacrifice your mind body and soul,
Into my grasps as we collapse into our passionate flow,
And rekindle the flames that had gone out in the cold,
Yeah now we’re cool again, we’ll see how long it’ll last
I’m hopin that the love will spread like it’s anthrax
But sometimes I swear it’s like you purposely wear a gasmask.[/center:3deoaz15]
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